g作文-已改

这是楼主自己写的一篇issue，求老师给改的，改得非常详细。

Undeniably, as the author suggests, disagreements do have some side effects which lead us to stress and inhibit learning. However, none of us will hes

外教给的开头样式模板 和提示 大家来看一看吧

I’ve reviewed it very carefully and want to improve on one specific area: PARAGRAPH DEVELOPMENT – OPENING PARAGRAPH. So, we’re going to fix this and g

「argument」25-25/100/102/164 jazz club [求改]

题目：
25) The following was written as a part of an application for a small-business loan by a group of developers in the city of Monroe.
A jazz music

issue 11--People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own

11. People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.Outline: partial agree, 正：1.建立相对自由而不伤害他人的社会，impossible绝对自由，保障well-being 

ISSUE-31

31. Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities.
人类是否应

写了好久的GRE Issue,分享一篇求改

有找native speaker看，只是别人不知道GRE什么模式，也许语法错误比较容易纠正。希望大家帮忙看看逻辑结构什么的，提些意见。还有不到三周就要考了！

这篇文章因为给的statement有两个部分，我的观点为：同意第一个部分，但是觉得第二部分有待讨论。不知道这样写可不可以？

Eve

为了AW而二战GRE，求大家斧正一篇ISSUE！

好吧，我4月27考了第一次G。但是AW=3……梦校的AW线是4，只好重考
昨晚写了一篇ISSUE，照着李建林那本书的思路来的，也有少许的句子是从提纲上摘抄的。在写作过程中，其实我很明白文章的总体结构应该如何，但是在每个论点的展开过程中，还是感觉力不从心。比如下面这篇：
//ISSUE0817


ISSUE-81(parents volunteer)

求重拍！

81/95.All parents should be required to volunteer time to their children's schools.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to whi

ISSUE-89

89.
题目：
Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system. 
 Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.
