【独立】public recognition
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这里的例子也不知道用什么，也没有两段之后再让步一段，会不会让分数降低啊？
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People care more about public recognition than about money. Even if no more money is given, public recognition can still make people work harder.
提纲：
同意。
1、从政治家选举可以看出，金钱并不是唯一的激励。这些时间和才智如果花在经商上可以赚更多的钱，但是还是有人花大力气竞选那些薪金并不丰厚的职位；
2、从我们从小到大竞选班长也可以看出。班长这一职位除了带来麻烦没有任何好处，但小朋友们还是愿意承担班长这一职责。
所以人们更在乎社会的认可。
Nowadays, there are increasing concerns ahout the tendency of people to pursue money rather than happiness of family or even their health. However, there is one thing that attracts even more people, that is public recognition. In my understanding, public recognition can make people work hard even if no money is given. And that's why the politicians can work hard for the government even not much money can be gained from their jobs.
Firstly, it can easily be seen from the competition for presidents that money is not the most important incentive to one's performance. As we all know, the salary earned of a president is no more than the money made from a ordinary business man, say a factory owner. But still, politicians spend a lot of efforts, money and time, into this fierce competition. What they are really pursuing is their social status. If they spend this share of effort, which may include the brain torturing preparation for lectures, hard time spent in doing polls, endless meeting with differet fields of peole, into any other businesses, there is a high possiblity that they could make a considerable sum of money far more than a thin salary. So the priority can be seen easily.
Also, we can see people trying to grasp public status from our childhood willingness to take on class monitors. It is quite common that there are always children from primary school all the way to universities are eager to act as the leader of a class. And we all know that this position will bring the leaders no more than troubles and tasks. They have to reconcile classmates that are in friction, and undertake most of the clean duties. What more, in this process, no reward is given. The only thing that drive them to do this is the desire to stand out in students.
To sum up, we can easily see from these cases what the role of public recognition plays in the life of civilians, and it would be obvious that many people sacrifice their time and effort to pursue social status even no money is given.
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这里的例子也不知道用什么，也没有两段之后再让步一段，会不会让分数降低啊？
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People care more about public recognition than about money. Even if no more money is given, public recognition can still make people work harder.
提纲：
同意。
1、从政治家选举可以看出，金钱并不是唯一的激励。这些时间和才智如果花在经商上可以赚更多的钱，但是还是有人花大力气竞选那些薪金并不丰厚的职位；
2、从我们从小到大竞选班长也可以看出。班长这一职位除了带来麻烦没有任何好处，但小朋友们还是愿意承担班长这一职责。
所以人们更在乎社会的认可。
Nowadays, there are increasing concerns ahout the tendency of people to pursue money rather than happiness of family or even their health. However, there is one thing that attracts even more people, that is public recognition. In my understanding, public recognition can make people work hard even if no money is given. And that's why the politicians can work hard for the government even not much money can be gained from their jobs.
Firstly, it can easily be seen from the competition for presidents that money is not the most important incentive to one's performance. As we all know, the salary earned of a president is no more than the money made from a ordinary business man, say a factory owner. But still, politicians spend a lot of efforts, money and time, into this fierce competition. What they are really pursuing is their social status. If they spend this share of effort, which may include the brain torturing preparation for lectures, hard time spent in doing polls, endless meeting with differet fields of peole, into any other businesses, there is a high possiblity that they could make a considerable sum of money far more than a thin salary. So the priority can be seen easily.
Also, we can see people trying to grasp public status from our childhood willingness to take on class monitors. It is quite common that there are always children from primary school all the way to universities are eager to act as the leader of a class. And we all know that this position will bring the leaders no more than troubles and tasks. They have to reconcile classmates that are in friction, and undertake most of the clean duties. What more, in this process, no reward is given. The only thing that drive them to do this is the desire to stand out in students.
To sum up, we can easily see from these cases what the role of public recognition plays in the life of civilians, and it would be obvious that many people sacrifice their time and effort to pursue social status even no money is given.
Words: 346.
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