【综合】求各路高人重拍TPO7~ecocertification
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The lecturer who we hear in the listening material totally disagrees with what we have learned from the reading passage, and points out its flaws with cogent evidence.
Firstly, the passage says that the consumers won't be interested in the ecocertification lable, for there are excessive advertisement around them everyday. However, the professor points out that, those certifications issued by this company is totally different from those common advertisements. As a matter of fact, consumers have confidence in those certifications. And products that are ecocertified will surely attract people's attention.
Secondly, the professor says that the difference in cost won't drive people away at all. He says that consumers only concerned about the price when the difference of two identical products is too large. While in this case, the minor increase in cost, say about 5 percent, won't influence their choice. And the consumers will be more concerned about whether what they choose will have a negative impact on the environment.
What's more, the third claim is totally unreasonable. According to the professor, what the company should care about is not foreign consumers, but foreign competitors. If they didn't publish their own ecocertified products, when products from abroad the country flush in, they will have no market share.
To conclude, the lecturer agrees with none of the claims raised in the reading material and think the ecocertified products will be popular. In a word, what we hear totally contradicts what we read.
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这篇是讲有家美国认证公司将推出自己的环保认证，并且指出这个在世界上已经很流行了。阅读部分说这个环保认证在美国不会吃香，因为：1、现在的人们不相信广告；2、羊毛出在羊身上，认证后的产品价格会高一些，人们会更愿意购买较为便宜的未认证产品；3、这些公司应该放更多注意力在国外的市场上。
教授不同意，理由如下：1、专业的认证和广告不同，人们还是比较信赖这种大公司的专业认证的；2、人们只有在两个产品差不多，而一个产品比另一个贵很多时才会在乎价格，这种认证后的产品贵不了多少，人们还是更看重环保；3、这些公司更应该关注的不是国外的客户，而是国外的竞争者。如果现在还不推出自己的环保认证产品，很快市场就会被国外的这类产品占据。
希望大家着重从语言上狠拍！
结构上综合写作据说是要把阅读内容带着写一下，是要在第一段简单介绍一下比较好，还是讲每一点时提一下，望大牛指点
Firstly, the passage says that the consumers won't be interested in the ecocertification lable, for there are excessive advertisement around them everyday. However, the professor points out that, those certifications issued by this company is totally different from those common advertisements. As a matter of fact, consumers have confidence in those certifications. And products that are ecocertified will surely attract people's attention.
Secondly, the professor says that the difference in cost won't drive people away at all. He says that consumers only concerned about the price when the difference of two identical products is too large. While in this case, the minor increase in cost, say about 5 percent, won't influence their choice. And the consumers will be more concerned about whether what they choose will have a negative impact on the environment.
What's more, the third claim is totally unreasonable. According to the professor, what the company should care about is not foreign consumers, but foreign competitors. If they didn't publish their own ecocertified products, when products from abroad the country flush in, they will have no market share.
To conclude, the lecturer agrees with none of the claims raised in the reading material and think the ecocertified products will be popular. In a word, what we hear totally contradicts what we read.
Words: 239
这篇是讲有家美国认证公司将推出自己的环保认证，并且指出这个在世界上已经很流行了。阅读部分说这个环保认证在美国不会吃香，因为：1、现在的人们不相信广告；2、羊毛出在羊身上，认证后的产品价格会高一些，人们会更愿意购买较为便宜的未认证产品；3、这些公司应该放更多注意力在国外的市场上。
教授不同意，理由如下：1、专业的认证和广告不同，人们还是比较信赖这种大公司的专业认证的；2、人们只有在两个产品差不多，而一个产品比另一个贵很多时才会在乎价格，这种认证后的产品贵不了多少，人们还是更看重环保；3、这些公司更应该关注的不是国外的客户，而是国外的竞争者。如果现在还不推出自己的环保认证产品，很快市场就会被国外的这类产品占据。
希望大家着重从语言上狠拍！
结构上综合写作据说是要把阅读内容带着写一下，是要在第一段简单介绍一下比较好，还是讲每一点时提一下，望大牛指点
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