机经作文求改求估分
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1.求好心人从语法逻辑词句丰富等角度进行评价
2.求估分。
3.不需要留面子。
4.我刚刚开始弄作文，但是824首战了，求意见。
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Colleges or Universities should
offer more courses to prepare students for the future before they start working.
There is no doubt that obtaining more knowledge will do go to one’s future. But, it seems that people always have a misconception: the more course a student take, the more knowledge which is useful for his career he will get. As an undergraduate, I object to the idea because taking too many courses means little or even nothing for a student’s future.
Firstly, it is undeniable that majoring in a specific field for four years do satisfy what a student needs for his future work. For example, as a employee in a Tencent, a well known IT company in China, I can guarantee that all the knowledge we need in programming can be learned in the first three year in college, let alone some people do not find a job that is unrelated to their major. What’s more, as we all know that one of the four years in university are arranged to find a practice job in a company to gain working experience. What the fact shows is that three years is enough for a student to absorb what he need. Otherwise, the learning time will be lengthened to ensure their time to take the courses.
In addition, spending more time in gathering experience for work is more valuable than spending time in taking more courses. As we all know that, knowledge like how to form a firm relationship with your customer, how to cooperate with your teammates, how to solve the challenge you face in your life, can not be obtained by taking courses. what’s more, such knowledge usually determine our career. For instance, Bill Gates dropped up in college, found the Microsoft and finally become the wealthiest man in the world. Jobs dropped too, found Apple, a world-renown company, and changed the world by his product. Though only a few courses they have taken in university, it doesn’t matter for they can be obtained in the society, however, their experience and chances that they get in the market, can never be learned in the courses.
In a word, there is no need for an undergraduate to take more courses, what he should do is to grow in the society by learning something can not be gained in the courses. therefore, that’s the reason why I refute the idea of taking more classes in the university.
2.求估分。
3.不需要留面子。
4.我刚刚开始弄作文，但是824首战了，求意见。
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Colleges or Universities should
offer more courses to prepare students for the future before they start working.
There is no doubt that obtaining more knowledge will do go to one’s future. But, it seems that people always have a misconception: the more course a student take, the more knowledge which is useful for his career he will get. As an undergraduate, I object to the idea because taking too many courses means little or even nothing for a student’s future.
Firstly, it is undeniable that majoring in a specific field for four years do satisfy what a student needs for his future work. For example, as a employee in a Tencent, a well known IT company in China, I can guarantee that all the knowledge we need in programming can be learned in the first three year in college, let alone some people do not find a job that is unrelated to their major. What’s more, as we all know that one of the four years in university are arranged to find a practice job in a company to gain working experience. What the fact shows is that three years is enough for a student to absorb what he need. Otherwise, the learning time will be lengthened to ensure their time to take the courses.
In addition, spending more time in gathering experience for work is more valuable than spending time in taking more courses. As we all know that, knowledge like how to form a firm relationship with your customer, how to cooperate with your teammates, how to solve the challenge you face in your life, can not be obtained by taking courses. what’s more, such knowledge usually determine our career. For instance, Bill Gates dropped up in college, found the Microsoft and finally become the wealthiest man in the world. Jobs dropped too, found Apple, a world-renown company, and changed the world by his product. Though only a few courses they have taken in university, it doesn’t matter for they can be obtained in the society, however, their experience and chances that they get in the market, can never be learned in the courses.
In a word, there is no need for an undergraduate to take more courses, what he should do is to grow in the society by learning something can not be gained in the courses. therefore, that’s the reason why I refute the idea of taking more classes in the university.
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