托福写作大佬帮忙看看一句话
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我用剑桥的write&improve检查发现这句话有问题，但又不知道问题在哪，希望大家指正！{:4_108:}
In sum,although the ability to communicate is really important for a successful leader,I argue that some other abilities,such as the abilities to learn,plan and organize,are also of great importance to a successful leader.
In sum,although the ability to communicate is really important for a successful leader,I argue that some other abilities,such as the abilities to learn,plan and organize,are also of great importance to a successful leader.
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