套瓷结果不佳，求大佬帮忙分析是不是套瓷信的问题
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背景是本科C9, cs专业，绩点4.23/5，本校科研两段，一篇会议一作，准备申请美国qs30-60的PhD。
从九月初开始联系的十几位老师都是研究方向比较符合的，有的主页上写了在招学生，只有一位模版回复了鼓励申请，其他均已读不回。
所以我想是不是我的套瓷信出了问题。请各位大佬帮忙看一看，是太宽泛了还是太像模版了，还是太长了呢？
我均为学术套，有模版，但是会根据每位教授的研究和publication改。求大家可以提一些宝贵意见。
Dear Professor XXX:
I hope this email finds you well. My name is XXX, and I am set to graduate in June 2024 with a Bachelor's degree in Computer Science from XXX University, China. I am writing this email to express my interest in the 2024 fall PhD candidate position in your group at XXX University.
I have thoroughly reviewed your publications from recent years and am very interested in research regarding XXX, which is very consistent with my research direction. Actually, the first time I became acquainted with your work was through your research paper "XXX" when I was conducting research regarding XXX. Specifically, we utilized （介绍我的研究内容）. Based on this research, a paper I submitted （介绍论文发表情况和时间）.
Also, I have a solid foundation in machine learning and strong programming skills. Previously, my research focus has been on machine learning and its application in software engineering, especially programming language analysis, as well as in computer vision/computer graphics, especially image processing and object detection. Specifically, in addition to the research I mentioned above, I have also conducted research XXX. My primary focus has been on XXX. And in the realm of , my primary area of concentration has been XXX, You can find more details about my academic and research background on my homepage:XXX. I have also attached my CV and my accepted paper for your convenience.
I believe I have acquired fundamental research skills, and I am dedicated enough to continue improving myself since I am aware that I am not a genius, and I believe that dedication and continued effort are essential to becoming an expert. Most importantly, I think your research direction is really very consistent with my future research direction. I believe my experience in previous research and my passion for exploring will certainly make contributions to your research group.
Thank you once again for your time and consideration. Looking forward to your favorable consideration of my application and I wonder if we can have more discussions on the potential projects online.
Sincerely,
XXX
从九月初开始联系的十几位老师都是研究方向比较符合的，有的主页上写了在招学生，只有一位模版回复了鼓励申请，其他均已读不回。
所以我想是不是我的套瓷信出了问题。请各位大佬帮忙看一看，是太宽泛了还是太像模版了，还是太长了呢？
我均为学术套，有模版，但是会根据每位教授的研究和publication改。求大家可以提一些宝贵意见。
Dear Professor XXX:
I hope this email finds you well. My name is XXX, and I am set to graduate in June 2024 with a Bachelor's degree in Computer Science from XXX University, China. I am writing this email to express my interest in the 2024 fall PhD candidate position in your group at XXX University.
I have thoroughly reviewed your publications from recent years and am very interested in research regarding XXX, which is very consistent with my research direction. Actually, the first time I became acquainted with your work was through your research paper "XXX" when I was conducting research regarding XXX. Specifically, we utilized （介绍我的研究内容）. Based on this research, a paper I submitted （介绍论文发表情况和时间）.
Also, I have a solid foundation in machine learning and strong programming skills. Previously, my research focus has been on machine learning and its application in software engineering, especially programming language analysis, as well as in computer vision/computer graphics, especially image processing and object detection. Specifically, in addition to the research I mentioned above, I have also conducted research XXX. My primary focus has been on XXX. And in the realm of , my primary area of concentration has been XXX, You can find more details about my academic and research background on my homepage:XXX. I have also attached my CV and my accepted paper for your convenience.
I believe I have acquired fundamental research skills, and I am dedicated enough to continue improving myself since I am aware that I am not a genius, and I believe that dedication and continued effort are essential to becoming an expert. Most importantly, I think your research direction is really very consistent with my future research direction. I believe my experience in previous research and my passion for exploring will certainly make contributions to your research group.
Thank you once again for your time and consideration. Looking forward to your favorable consideration of my application and I wonder if we can have more discussions on the potential projects online.
Sincerely,
XXX
